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发表于 2007-3-19 23:41:26 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<em><font size="4">这个夜晚<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->异常的短暂<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->仿佛坐在面前<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->久久<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->久久<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->想留住你带来的温暖<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->如果时光可以倒转<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->那些青春的誓言<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不知可否<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->会与你肩并肩<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->可我知道<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->在远处<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->我跟你站在一线<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->曾经的呐喊<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不光是民主的心声<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->还有<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->年轻有为的激情澎湃</font></em><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->
发表于 2007-3-20 07:29:29 | 显示全部楼层
<p>愤青的味道在不经意间便很自然地流露了出来,不能不说也让人有所触动。是祖国的错还是现代教育的畸形结果?留下一点余音让读者去回味。如果注意再深入些,肯定能成为一首好诗。</p><p>引:坚强的性格挺拔起泰山的气魄,<br/>我深深地爱着我的祖国,<br/>辽阔的海疆装满了我所有的寄托。<br/></p>
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-19 23:42:09 | 显示全部楼层
<div style="FONT-SIZE: 12px;"><font size="4"><em>那些曾经的苦难<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不是今天做人的资本<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->那些曾经的迷惘<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不是今天仇恨的种子<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->抛弃我们的<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不是祖国<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->被我们抛弃的<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->缺是<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->祖国<br/></em></font></div>
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-19 23:42:23 | 显示全部楼层
<div style="FONT-SIZE: 12px;"><font size="4"><em>无奈<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->滋生出如新生儿般的眷恋<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->只是<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->成年了<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->成年后游走的天空<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->满是幻变<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->可你<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->可我<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->总会流淌着同样的血液<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->从母亲用身体孕育我们的时刻起<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->直道死亡<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->这血<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->还要传给子孙后代<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->不可改变<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--></em></font></div>
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-19 23:42:43 | 显示全部楼层
<div style="FONT-SIZE: 12px;"><font size="4"><em>那<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->决不只是<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->苦难滋生的土壤<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->如果你想<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->就做个真正无私的人吧<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->抛弃自我<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->只为理想<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->只为曾经有的那个信念<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--><br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->坚持<br/><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment--></em></font></div>
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